
| 本书优势及卖点: 目前时常上的四、六级作文指导书主要讲的是谋篇布局和段落结构;但针对语言表达方面,要么是提供范文,要么仅是讲解语法,涉及句子结构和遣词造句的内容却少之又少。而这正是制约学生提高写作水平的瓶颈。鉴于此,本书有如下四大创新: ※ 创新1 按照循序渐进的科学学习方法,直击四、六级作文核心难点——遣词、造句。 ※ 创新2 结合实例,指出句式呆板、语言罗嗦的根源,使语言更为简洁,表达更为流畅。 ※ 创新3 精选大量“急需掌握的表达”和“写作中用错的表达”,使语言更为地道,表达更流畅。 ※ 创新4 新东方权威写作专家包凡一老师逐字逐句修改学生写作原文71篇,并加以精辟点评。在真实、具体的应用环境中再现“句子结构+遣词造句”的魅力,凸显本书实战性! 读者定位:所有相参加四六级考试的考生,及对英语学习与写作感兴趣的读者。 |
| 包凡一,新东方创始人之一,新东方教育科技集团留学研究院院长、新东方学校写作中心创始人。著名英语教学专家、加拿大温莎大学MBA、传播学硕士,著名留学咨询、签证专家。著有图书《新东方词汇进阶》《留学申请推荐信写作模板》《留学申请个人陈述写作模板》《留学书信写作指导》《手把手教你TOEFL作文》《迈向顶尖MBA》《英语现代文背诵篇章》《时事题材英语会话》等20余部。 |
| 第一章 段落结构的问题 第二章 句子的问题 滥用从句 不会使用短语 不会使用并列结构 下笔时缺乏考虑 Tt引导的从句达到泛滥的程序 需要使用从句的情况 第三章 在写作中经常用错的表达 平行结构 one 和ones被滥用 意义过于模糊的几个词 写作时应该尽量避免使用的词 第四章 急需掌握的表达 第五章 习作评改 四级作文 Passages1 Welcome to Our Club Passages2 On the Spring Festival Gala Passages3 Students Selecting Their Lecturers Passages4 Volunteer Reruitment Passages5 Should the University Campus be Open to Tourists? Passages6 Happy Teacher's Day Passages7 My Most Is Getting Smaller Passages8 The World Is Getting Smaller Passages9 Reading Selectively or Extensively Passages10 How to Succeed in a Job Interview Passages11 What Would Happen If There Were No Power? Passages12 Traeling Passages13 Books Passages14 Bicycle in China Passages15 Cooking Passages16 Television Passages17 Can Money Buy Happiness? Passages18 Advantage of a Job Interview Passages19 The Two-day Weekend Passages20 Global Shortage of Fresh Water Passages21 Practice Makes Perfect Passages22 Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus Passages23 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities Passages24 Do“Lucky Numbers”Rdally Bring Good Luck? Passages25 Don't Hesitate to Say“No” Passages26 How I Finance My College Education Passages27 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? Passages28 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport Passages29 The Students of China Passages30 Love Passages31 The Ever Growing World Population Passages32 Underground Cites:Are They Possibe? Passages 33 Living in the City or in the Country Passages 34 Smoking and Health Passages 35 Computers Passages 36 Education 六级作文 Passagess 1 The Celebration of Western Festivals Passagess 2 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? Passagess 3 Traveling Abroad Passagess 4 A Letter Declining A Job Offer Passagess 5 Say No to Pirated Products Passagess 6 Health Gains in Developing Countries Passagess 7 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports Passagess 8 Are Pets Good for Mankind? Passagess 9 Teenage Smoking Passagess 10 Buses vs. Private Cars Passagess 11 Should Parents Buy Computers for Their Kids Passagess 12 Advertisements Passagess 13 Family Planning Passages 14 City Life Vs. Country Life Passages 15 Failure Passages 16 A Letter Welcoming Your Schoolmate Passages 17 How Do I Finance My College Education Passages18 Reading Selectively or Extensively Passages 19 Don't Hesitate to Say“No” Passages 20 Do “Lucky Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck? Passages 21 My View on Fake Commodities Passages 22 My View on Job-Hopping Passages 23 Haste Makes Waste Passages 24 Why Do I Take the College English Test Band 6? Passages 25 Should Firecrackers Be Banned? Passages 26 Wealth and Happiness Passages 27 Fighting Against Crimes Passages 28 Economic Development and Pollution Passages 29 Fast Food Passages 30 Travelling Passages 31 Fighting Against Corruption Passages 32 China's Entry into the WTO Passages 33 Success in the Bid for Olympic Games Passages 34 Job Interviews Passages 35Traffic Jam |
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